Brian Brodhead Glaser: on "Heart's Needle"

Snodgrass sees his relationship to his daughter as both more enduring and more changing, more particular in its phases.  And he recognizes that part of his role as a father is to tolerate the increasing separations from her that cause him a poignant sense of isolation.

In this respect, we can see Snodgrass as influenced by the ideals of the New Fatherhood in a way that Yeats and the tradition of fatherhood poetry he represents are not.  That this is not an entirely comfortable role for Snodgrass we can further discern from the last section of the poem ["Heart's Needle'].  Narrating a springtime return to the zoo with his daughter, Snodgrass describes the pleasures of the season, including budding crocuses and hot dog barbeques, before ending the poem in this way:

In full regalia, the pheasant cocks

    march past their dubious hens;

the porcupine and the lean, red fox

    trot around bachelor pens


and the miniature painted train

    wails on its oval track:

you said, I'm going to Pennsylvania!

    and waved.  And you've come back.


If I loved you, they said, I'd leave

    and find my own affairs.

Well, once again this April, we've

    come around to the bears;


punished and cared for, behind bars,

    the coons on bread and water

stretch thin black fingers after ours.

    And still you are my daughter.  (Snodgrass 1961, 418-33)

The cocks and the male porcupine and fox are compared with the wailing train, suggesting that for all the color and pride of these animals there is something futile in their lives, conspicuously without families as they are--they trot in comically empty circles.  This is the kind of animal masculinity that "they" would remand the divorced Snodgrass to, one painfully extraneous to the affairs of child-rearing and intimate connection with the cycle of life.  His insistance that "You are still my daughter" is a vehement refusal of this role.  Yet in its unveiled plea for a special relation it makes him into a creature very like the bear and beseeching racoons that they have again "come around to," particularly since his daughter is returned to him from a departure to Pennsylvania that she so enthusiastically anticipated--his blunt "And you've come back" carries a weight of patient expectation.  If he has escaped the cage of childless bachelorhood, he neverless finds himself confined to a role in which his daughter's alternating needs for companionship and independence, rather than his own, establish the rhythm of their relationship.

Jay Rogoff: on "Disposal"

Snodgrass's particularly American confessionalism--his lack of reticence in appropriating his own life and family for poetry--also distinguishes his early work from Larkin's. Not for Specialists includes six poems from his 1970 chapbook Remains, a bitter expose of unhappy family life centering on the early death of a hopelessly mousy wallflower sister, a sequence apparently so personal that he first issued it under the anagrammatic pseudonym S. S. Gardons:

The unworn long gown, meant for dances She would have scarcely dared attend, Is fobbed off on a friend-- Who can't help wondering if it's spoiled But thinks, well, she can take her chances.

This poem, "Disposal" also describes how "One lace/Nightthing lies in the chest, unsoiled/By wear, untouched by human hands," and notes "those cancelled patterns/And markdowns that she actually wore,/Yet who do we know so poor/ They'd take them?" That "actually" serves a vital role, not just filling out the meter, but expressing quiet amazement at her impoverished taste and acceptance of her shriveled emotional circumstances. As in Donne's elegy "Going to Bed" clothing becomes a synecdoche for the woman who wears it, but here creating a scenario of isolation and misery rather than erotic play.

[Snodgrass's poetry's] formal elegance domesticated the worst shocks of our emotional lives, intensifying them by ironically pretending they participated in an orderly universe we could endure.


Rogoff, Jay. "Shocking, surprising snodgrass." The Southern Review 42.4 (2006): 885+. Academic OneFile. Web. 9 Feb. 2014.